Still tentatively going with “Empire of Earth: Breaking Free”. I’m concerned that Star Citizen is using the name “United Empire of Earth”. Too close? Potential alternative would be some form of “Oppression of Benevolence” or “Benevolent Oppression” or some such thing.
So the first book in what I hope to make a series is complete. I’ve gone with the title “Into the Grid”.
Because I love Wordle, here is the cloud for my current draft. Not sure why “back” features so prominently…
Been working on my Sci-Fi story. Here’s the opening. A prelude to the first scene, so to speak Thoughts?
In the future (according to “Into the Grid”), a new form of prejudice has appeared. In this case, it is those who are “pure” human, vs. those that have cybernetic body parts. In this excerpt from chapter 1, we see Connor, an investigative reporter, talking with Trevor at a diner. The waitress has an artificial arm, and she hasn’t been able to afford to see a bio-mechanic.