The dialog in Chapter 5 came out horribly. I was so busy trying to be clever that I completely failed at making it realistic. The conversation wanders all over the place, nobody gets to the point, and a couple of key revelations don’t even get made.
Because of this, I decided it was time to sit down with Llaewyn and have a little heart to heart chat with him. That is, as much as a human can have with a stuck up elf.
Warning: If you are still waiting to read chapter 5 (but didn’t already read the first draft), you might want to wait. Basically, if you don’t know who or what Llaewyn is, and want to find out the long way, skip the rest of this post.
Otherwise, read on for how it went.